We wrote an essay about happiness exploring a discussion between various established authors on the topic. First draft:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ezl6Qs0A-kLSGqCGNVafy-BVK4cWMA37N_RCS7V8pyw/edit Final draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bGom4Jtb5DJZ-nYsheUIFeAGES4kTYWDssO2lPeBkfo/edit
Kyle McLaughlin- Both Restack and Samuel introduce the division of our attention and technology as topics that are perceived as harmful, but argues that in this modern age, can be embraced to lead productive and fulfilling lives. Restack argues, “…to be successful in today’s workplace you have to incorporate some elements of ADD/ADHD. You must learn to rapidly process information, function amidst surroundings your parents would have described as “chaotic”, always remain prepared to rapidly shift from one activity to…
To write this paper I went through four rounds of revision. I did two rounds of revision for my first draft, one round of revision for my second draft and one final round of revision before I turned in my final product. For the first draft I wrote about three pages of my paper and during class we were assigned peer revision groups. My professor also looked at my paper and made comments. The comments I received from my professor…
In high school peer review was not an extremely lengthy process, especially if I was reviewing a classmate’s paper, especially if I was assigned to review that person’s paper and I did not know them personally. If one of my friends asked me to read over their paper I could informally tell them my critiques rather than have to go through a structured peer revision class exercise. Informally reviewing a friend’s paper allowed me to have less of a filter…
In the past I would integrate my quotes in the same way as discussed by my professor in my English 110 Class. During high school we were taught to introduce a quote by briefly summarizing what was happening when the quote was said, including who said the quote and the manner in which they said it when working with a piece of literature in an essay. We were taught to introduce our quotes like this “While Frodo was explaining how…
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