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Bella Crugnale:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GOlvy0LfPCGK7Qh9DpIj6VPPkmuHpLq_7FkszuFL5TA/edit Ty Wilhemson: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yJk0bkU68ajjdSqmRC1IxR9bBjUZlIBe4pEgRCigxx4/edit While editing Ty’s essay I suggested to him to include more when introducing the Authors. It is important to introduce the authors by saying who they are, what they do, what text you are referencing and what they say in those texts to give structure to yours ideas as well as give credit to these authors when you talk about them throughout your essay. I also suggested for him to make his thesis statement clearer as…

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Written on March 20th: To improve my draft, I could include information from authors studied during the happiness section of class in order to further build the conversation I create within my writing, as well as to support or refute the claims that I make about happiness from my own life. An author that I was thinking of was Catherine Sanderson and her Science of Happiness Ted talk. I believe that would be the best choice because her talk encompasses…

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For my second essay I wrote about technology’s negative effects on our relationships, as well as our overall happiness. First draft:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Es5e7jPeBbZAbR3CokHqUpLpSOQPuDjdvwUpEWxmjWE/edit Final Draft:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aROnQ2tAU3XjoeFLti_bCEjEEQDpdGhA0uzQH1DHdkE/edit

The active reading skill of highlighting important information as well as summarizing the information that is difficult to grasp in my own words has helped me extensively in my anatomy class. It has helped me to understand the textbook chapters assigned for homework in a deeper manner, as well as commit them to memory better. A lot of the topics in Anatomy are processes with many steps and it helps to step back from the reading to really chew on…

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As I received my grade and feedback for my happiness essay from the professor, I noticed that most of the comments were based on grammar, as well as mechanical errors. I also noticed a few comments referring to further developing my ideas in a deeper manner. I feel like I get my initial point across, but could definitely elaborate more on my ideas, as well as expand. Not only should I elaborate on the ideas I make but the explanation…

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Carly Walker-https://docs.google.com/document/d/17Csy-qZW2geKcGkvmakBVP_yt1fWl4TZpxAiOhtLDJY/edit Nora Susi-https://docs.google.com/document/d/15ArfrknXpR7B2spV8u1X10OD8CY0hlFxzQB2eFsibMk/edit Abby McKenna- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VJ94Kbrtucqa_kIN53uvRTSu0TnrtgbPoGzbjM8Rg-k/edit Maggie Maznikki- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wNuBZdnnCjL1yg_xvASxYbDVp1EEhYULXtRiGB67-Ks/edit Meg Thomas-https://docs.google.com/document/d/18ISgU2bE-tzzM3T9n42EzDF7GpSd85fj5anaVwn1yGk/edit

We wrote an essay about happiness exploring a discussion between various established authors on the topic. First draft:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ezl6Qs0A-kLSGqCGNVafy-BVK4cWMA37N_RCS7V8pyw/edit Final draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bGom4Jtb5DJZ-nYsheUIFeAGES4kTYWDssO2lPeBkfo/edit    

Kyle McLaughlin- Both Restack and Samuel introduce the division of our attention and technology as topics that are perceived as harmful, but argues that in this modern age, can be embraced to lead productive and fulfilling lives. Restack argues, “…to be successful in today’s workplace you have to incorporate some elements of ADD/ADHD. You must learn to rapidly process information, function amidst surroundings your parents would have described as “chaotic”, always remain prepared to rapidly shift from one activity to…

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